Friday, May 13, 2011
Happens all the Time...
According to the ideas of health disparities, unawareness of animal cruelty and knowledge needed to take action. I believe this has led to changes in society and the way of living. These ideas mean money is preferable and no emotional connection is taken place. Few know the details of animal cruelty and health disparities. The details are important to persuade most people to make a change. Animal cruelty disparities in the book Eating Animals by Jonathan Safran Foer are interpreted as normal. Foer states, “Blood will slowly drain out of the bird, which happens, all the time” (Foer 133). The automated throat slitters often miss the birds’ throat. The workers, most of the time don’t notice this negligence. This makes the conscious bird die slowly in pain. In the other hand, no one cares and it happens all the time.
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I must say I am impressed of the attention you are giving these issues you write about. One major issue I have is the font and color. It was hard for me to read and especially with the vibrant colors in your background I would advise either the change of your backdrop or one SOLID color that wouldn’t make it difficult to read your blogs. And it might help if you increased the font size; you want to make sure everyone can read your blogs, especially those with eye problems. Another thing, when you’re informing the reader about your topic it’s vital to have evidence and details (so the reader can picture what your discussing). For example your blog “It Happens All the Time”, what does? Where’s your evidence? Where specifically? Why? It helps to answer all of the 5 W’s and the H questions, like not leaving a single stone unturned. By answering those questions you cover all of the bases. Also when you talk of one specific person it helps to inform the reader who that person is. From someone of the outside looking in I don’t know who Kessler is. By telling me his/hers occupation or study of interest lets me know it’s not some random person writing an article on a random topic. It also helps to introduce your source. For example, Food Inc. I know it’s a movie but someone else might not.
ReplyDeleteOther than that great stories and topics of discussion! Just focus on the little things, guarantee it will make a whole lot difference.